‘Dotty Ditties, Volume 6: A Whole-@$$ Record’
Individual Song Breakdowns



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Individual Song Breakdowns

The previous song breakdowns apply. I’ll be using this space to elucidate the last six tracks.

For the ‘Dotty Ditties, Volume 4: These Are New Songs’ EP breakdowns, click here.

For the ‘Dotty Ditties, Volume 5: Here Are Some More New Songs’ EP breakdowns, click here.


Memories for Sale (drum transcription, percussion overdub transcription)

I’ve mentioned this in the past, but usually a Ditties track-sequence follows the order in which the songs were written. It’s just strangely worked out that way, for the most part. However, this EP is anomalous, in that only two of the tunes are sequenced congruently with when they were composed: “Kitty-Cat Claque” & “Congé.” That was a lot to explain a highly minimal detail, haha.

Every so often, the idea of attempting to capture the spirit of a song—or a section of a song—will inform the genesis of one of my own. I wanted to write an R&B-ish tune with a heavy backbeat with lots of space; Aerosmith’s “Love in an Elevator” inspired this.

The effect at the very beginning is a mix of the whole tune whizzing by at about 96x. The guitar parts are ’sample-programmed’—no way in hell I could’ve played ‘em. My pal and session-vocalist wizard Sinha Krammer guests on the back half of each chorus, tracking a pretty unusual arpeggiated chord. What makes it so is not the note choice, but rather the articulation/enunciation of each syllable and its relation; I had to contend with the same trouble in the first half.

There’s a key change in the bridge with some pretty low vocals, and some crazy (for me) bass shredding towards the end of the second chorus. Special thanks to my perennial vocal ‘vetter’ Gabriel Riccio for feedback on all of these tunes, especially this one.

Distilled down lyrically, this is another ‘evil capitalism’ number, with the story being a sci-fi-ish concept about a corporation that buys and sells portions of brains/consciousness (memories, beliefs, etc.). It pans around different vantage points.

Lyrics:
For sale is my own imagination for a low price today
Call our hotline right away
Cut my brain clean
Partitioned up all the good stuff, new earnings
Buy now, faster
I'm your master, caveat emptor, uh-huh
Publicize, lionize, hypnotize
Don't trust me
Advertise, patronize, realize
Click here, try now for free
Act now, save
Just today
Such a good score, dragoon the poor
But wait there's more
Iniquitous, delicious
Fuck misconduct, buy my product
Officious
Beliefs are ersatz, put them on layaway
Argosy has docked, how you'll flock
Ideas are oftentimes a big crock
Publicize, lionize, hypnotize
You can always trust me
Advertise, patronize, realize
Click here, try now for free
For sale is my own imagination for a low price today
Fob our schlock to our flock, sans belief you shan't balk


Ode to the Jilted (drum transcription)

A doomed-relationship/unrequited-love song, but a poppy one with a fun, driving chorus. The repeat of the second chorus starts getting wild, with surprising chords that venture out of the scale, a quick sextuplet drum fill, and some high-ass screams. Not high ass screams.

Here’s more superfluous information regarding a minimal detail: one of the plug-ins on the master channel helped to generate the texture/character at the end, as well as being inadvertently responsible for the sound coming out of only the right channel. My recording computer is ancient, and doesn’t always handle well the abundance of tracks and plug-ins that I typically use. The ‘correct’ way for the ending to have been processed through said plug-in was for both channels to function, but I had become accustomed to hearing it incorrectly. So, when bouncing, I started verifying that the plug-in would malfunction as such. Technology, ain’t it grand?

Lyrics:
Doo doo doo dooo...
Catechized, paralyzed
Is this what you want
Loquacious, you're rapacious
No matter what you flaunt
My scrambled preamble
No doubt you had your fun
Morning's held on by a thread, fortune
Am I your raft of hope
Aslope with ease, happiness is a disease
Maybe they like me, maybe they care
Maybe it's reciprocal
I wouldn't dare
Maybe they like me, maybe they care
Could this be reciprocal
My head, the weight bears
Benighted, shortsighted
This is what you want
Our lapses form an apsis
No matter what you thought
Running and spinning 'round
Right-side up, upside down
It's one confusing din
Life will often cruelly swinge
May your heart beat a trillion
Resounds, the day dawns
Fawns of vermilion
Maybe they like me, maybe they care
Maybe it's reciprocal
I wouldn't dare
Maybe they like me, maybe they care
Could this be reciprocal
My head, the weight bears
Maybe they love you, maybe they dare
This is predictable
I just don't care
Ignis fatuus, vespers we shared
I want out, you want in
Ode to the jilted


Kitty-Cat Claque (drum transcription)

I cannot recall the source of the musical inspiration; perhaps I was embracing the challenge of a selection of notes—with many semitones—that aren’t inherent in a set scale (A, B, D, D#, E, F, F#, G). The accent pattern in the A section is sustained when the drums straighten out.

I wrote the lyrics shortly after yet another mass shooting. Ultimately, it’s a critique of our government’s inaction, but conflated with caring for a kitten. You didn’t misread that. The even-quirkier-than-usual title is to draw attention and perhaps further investigation into the subject matter. And to articulate a bit of my position, I’m not anti-2A. But I do think that the very first part of the clause, “A well-regulated militia,” is woefully disregarded.

Lyrics:
(megaphone rambling)
If you're wondering why I'm here, so am I. I’m the disruptor, the interloper. A being so cute and fuzzy you can’t tear yourself away. The quaver of loneliness, a pool of sweat collected near the tailbone. I can represent peripeteia. From natal origin you coddle me, and many wish for my disappearance. Truculent, willful ignorance will prevail when stricter regulations do not.
Fear this kittycat, so acrobatic
Semi-automatic
Pet me once, fire me twice
Discharge
Belly rub thrice, thrice, thrice, thrice...
Misuse by sick owners put me out in the cold
Kill off the stragglers with pulicide
In extremis
SHOOT


Living in an Ellipsis (drums + percussion overdub chart)

Bolstered by the positive experience of writing and recording “Megalopsychia,” I endeavored to write another ballad-y, mostly acoustic piece with a lot of harmonic content and shifts and a melodically winding, challenging vocal arrangement. The second chorus in particular has to contain some of the highest notes I’ve yet tracked, I’m still incredulous as to how I hit ‘em. I love how the outro turned out. This might be one of my finer moments.

Lyrically, it’s all about finding your calling and persevering, even in the face of self-doubt, and giving the bird to The Man—whomever/whatever that means to you. The opening line was an afterthought, inadvertently nodding towards “Wishing Well,” from DD2. I nicked the chorus-hook line from a Henry Rollins book, can’t recall which one. Thanks, Hank!

Lyrics:
From the time that I was young
I hadn't a clue as to why I was always saddened
A change played out one day, it came
Poems could not express the filament flamed
Living in an ellipsis, dissembled armistice
I don't know the right way to go
Living in an ellipsis, dissembled armistice
I'm a wraith, toiling for my faith
Reveal yourself to me
Dielectric design
Inchoate, a prosaic shape
Glaucous hazing on a corybantic state
We're all dreamers, we've to pay the price
Peeling away redundant cliches
Living in an ellipsis, dissembled armistice
I don't know the right way to go
Living in an ellipsis, dissembled armistice
I'm a wraith, toiling for my faith
Shall I someday slow down not at your behest
I'll still be your ambivalent thorn


Manqué (drum transcription)

This was the first song that I wrote for DD6, initiated on 16DEC22. Though I don’t really listen to ‘doom metal’ (unless you count Black Sabbath), I wanted to try my hand writing something plodding and heavy. I also wanted to combine this aesthetic with another: multi-layered polyrhythms. Within a measure of 8-4 at 35 BPM, the bass drum is playing two groupings of quarter-note septuplets with the pedal hat marking the downbeat of each new one, the floor tom is playing a whole-note triplet, and the ride cymbal is playing two groupings of 8th-note 11-tuplets, with the snare etching out a backbeat—thus also rendering this a giant metric modulation—every four hits. The bass is mostly locked with the kick, the mandolin with the floor tom, and the guitar’s chunking along big chords seemingly in its own zip code. Once the vocal enters (singing in 11-tuplets requires a custom click, hah!), the simultaneous entrance of the xylophone pulls the 11 feel a bit closer to the forefront, providing another supportive rhythm and auxiliary melodies.

After a haunting bridge, the A section is reprised with a straightened rhythm section. The guitar chords are now in the same zip code, and there’s a soft bed of sound design that’s comprised of my own rambling, with reversed audio. The solo instrument is an extremely processed theremin. I did two takes and comped ‘em.

Like “Frolicking in the Lava,” lyrics-wise, this is an entirely stream-of-consciousness effort.

Lyrics:
I don’t know, I don’t care
You can win, you can have it, it’s all yours
Everything
I don’t know, I don’t care
You can win, you can have it, take everything, it’s all yours
Pour me forth
Like the blood that courses through my wefting wen
Like the thoughts that crystallize
It’s all equalized
Like my flesh I have shedded
Tyros limned in the den


Congé (drum transcription)

“Living in an Ellipsis” was originally the last thing that I’d intended to write, initiated on 05JAN23. I had begun composing The Soundtrack of Nonexistence in February of the same year, and wrote “Congé” in March to act as a sort of single. As the record evolved, it felt more and more out-of-place. There were also, well, lyrics which were integral, and I was trying to avoid anything lyric-heavy, as I consider the closing lyrics of Delectable Machinery II—and thus the closing lyric of the entire second ‘mini-oeuvre’—to be the end of “Threnody,” which are also the opening lyrics of “Fantasist” from Projects III. This creates a bookend, just as the ending synth swell of Finite III is the beginning of Finite: Complete, the first mini-oeuvre. Of course, technically there are lyrics that follow “Threnody,” but I consider “Requiem for a Fantasist” a poem, as well as the sparse stuff on TSoN, which is even more like merely poetic wallpaper.

I seem to recall consulting a musical key ‘mood chart’ to land on B major—a furious, impassioned key—to craft this, as I was navigating tumult and turmoil and sought to express it. NIN’s “The Perfect Drug” was an influence. I wrote the bizarre, interwoven dual-string melody that opens it in Guitar Pro, then went on a hunt through my Hard Drive of Sessions Past in order to grab every note that Sophia Uddin had played for me—from somewhere, at some point—and stitched it all together and processed it.

There are a lot of programmed drums in this one. I further distinguished the pre-chorus samples by re-amping the kick and snare through a Roland Cube stuffed inside of a dryer, a method I also used for the guitar solo in “Everything’s Tangled (And Made to Be Broken).”

The outro sees a key change along with a dynamic/vibe change; a respite from the chaos. Lyrics: more stuff about unrequited love and relationship failure. We get it, Trav.

Lyrics:
You want more, I want less
Heretofore, was I the best
Blunt trauma to the heart
Why'd I start this interest
Teratoid, my frame of mind is nothing
You need me, but I don't need anything
And you lash out in surprise
And I can surmise
You are so emptying
Beseeching
Lay siege to my purling
Face each new question burning
This impasse, shall it fall
Hang up now, end it all
(simultaneously)
Stall and stall
(You want more, I want less)
Hang up now, end it all
(Heretofore, was I the best)
Occlude my
(Blunt trauma to the heart)
Own anew
(Why'd I lose my interest)
I feel perennially benumbed
Contumely spills into lonely
And you shun
Teratoid, my frame of mind is ashamed
You need me, but I don't need anything
And you lash out in surprise
And I can surmise
You are so emptying
You need me, but I don't need anything
And you lash out in surprise
And I will surmise
You are so emptying
You are so emptying
You are so emptying
You are so
Let me go, let me go, let me go
No black and white, we're in the gray
Only inside can admissions be made




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